I know this is your draft, but for the final be sure to take your time cropping things out. I can tell by how your foot is missing in one picture that you kind of rushed on it. Also, don't forget to add a few adjectives to how you changed, such as "motivated, inspired, etc." (It was on the requirements.)Lastly, try to make your sentence a bit more precise or shorter. (:
I know this is your draft, but for the final be sure to take your time cropping things out. I can tell by how your foot is missing in one picture that you kind of rushed on it. Also, don't forget to add a few adjectives to how you changed, such as "motivated, inspired, etc." (It was on the requirements.)Lastly, try to make your sentence a bit more precise or shorter. (:
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