GREAT START, TRY TO MAKE THE FONT OF YOUR WORDS A BIT CLEARER AND BLENDED BETTER WITHIN THE GRAPHIC. SAME GOES FOR THE "RANYL" TRY TO MATCH IT WITH RUDY. MS(3)
I think you should've chosen a different font color for your quote thingy because it's hard to read. Also, it might be better to make the Rudy and Ranyl box symmetrical. Other than that, I think it's good.
I liked the connection between you and your allusion, and how you added a part of your poem to the graphic. Change the color of the text, though, because I couldn't really see it clearly.
GREAT START, TRY TO MAKE THE FONT OF YOUR WORDS A BIT CLEARER AND BLENDED BETTER WITHIN THE GRAPHIC. SAME GOES FOR THE "RANYL" TRY TO MATCH IT WITH RUDY. MS(3)
ReplyDeleteI think you should've chosen a different font color for your quote thingy because it's hard to read. Also, it might be better to make the Rudy and Ranyl box symmetrical. Other than that, I think it's good.
ReplyDeleteI liked the connection between you and your allusion, and how you added a part of your poem to the graphic. Change the color of the text, though, because I couldn't really see it clearly.
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