Parent's Comments

1.What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
    Your Convention & Presentation is what I like best because that is your final draft where every written thing has been corrected, edited or revised, & ready to be published.
2.What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
   I liked Your Coming of Age Outcome of overcoming your fear being put down & insulted at how you play in sports. I would like to see you improve on your Sentence & Fluency, I believe there were words that needed to be changed or added that would make your writing more effective & beneficial to your Topic.
3.Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me? Your Word Choice was most successful because it suits to your character in your writings.
 
4.Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester? I would like You to improve on your Sentence & Fluency Traits in the coming semester. I believe You could do it by not slacking on your responsibilities in your academics in general.