I am a friend of many
Everyday I put a smile on a person's face
I'm loyal to others and
persistent on getting the things i want
I also have many talents and
my best one is helping other's when
they call for me
A man's best friend is what i am
You needed more detail before you can call yourself a man's best friend. What is mans best friend. You needed more characteristics for yourself.
ReplyDeleteYour poem describes you well, but you could use stronger words to describe yourself. Maybe you could go more in depth about your qualities that are like a friend? Good job though c:
ReplyDeleteI'm sure that you could elaborate a bit more. Maybe, clear up what you meant about the man's best friend thing? Were you talking about a dog?
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